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January Cosmic

bitter cold
cleans up
this January sky

black birds freckle the
shimmering ocean above

waterless, but wet.

chilled Winter air leaks into
space in a spray
of blue

and when
drawn in deeply
my lungs expand

just breathe.


6 thoughts on “January Cosmic

  1. well, ya know it’s late and heading towards 2 and im wondering what the heck is southern man up to… so heading on over to his direction… lovely image of midnight blue… breathing in expanding the galaxies… a honeymoon in the heavens…

  2. The first few lines are ones I’ve tried to find for ages and you found them .. a way to describe that brilliant coldness. Gorgeous poem. You just keep posting one stellar poem after another. Envy.


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